Very good song here,i liked the piano at the beggining, the chopping on it it´s very good, it´s better when that subtle pad comes in on the 32th bar of the song, it somehow remembered me of another song. (but in this case i don´t remember the artist and the name song.)
On the first drop, the breaks are good and very dynamic, but the break feels very mono, and doesn´t have any variation or programming, leaving that space very empty and dull, i would recommend some subtle breaks layering and panning on the main break, along with some programming on all of it.
On 00:44 the vocal chops are very good, but i could have expected better and faster vocal chops, but as it is is normal, also, i could´ve added a type of ping-pong delay on the vocal mix, with some subtle reverb, like an 25% wet, because the vocal chops feels very dry.
On 01:05, the same 64 intro bars repeat, but it´s just with the vocal chops, i would have expected another progression on the beat, or a crazier piano chop, but it didn´t anyways it´s normal.
On the end, i expected a much better ending, it felt very unexpected and harsh, you could´ve added like some reverb on the master channel, and then put an automation on the channel rack at the last bars of the songs, or maybe just a simple fade out.
The mixing is normal, the low end is very hearable, very good mixing on the reese on this one, i didn´t like so much the compression on the amen break, also, the equalization on it feels very weird, the high end on the amen break feels a bit saturated on my opinion, i would recommend fixing that.
About the mastering i don´t have very much to say.
So, in my opinion, i would say this is a very good atmospheric Jungle piece (please, don´t mislabel this as breakcore, it isn´t), with a dark vibes, and i think, a similar sound to like sewerslvt.
SCORES:
Variation: 3.5/5
Drum programming: 2/5
Mixing and Mastering: 4.25/5
Final score: 4/5
Very original Jungle piece, with a good atmosphere and dark vibes, with some fixing on the variation, and a bit on the mixing, it´s perfect.
I absolutely wish you good luck for your future projects!
-UnSovieticoXD